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Trail of Lifefire by =Ex1:iconEx1:



Always I remember
the endless time we spent together
with you following me
as closely as can be
Anything you wanted
I went through hell to get
Never desiring you to want
whatever that meant
and sometimes I'm sure you understood why
but I never told you I had to try...

Make a wish on a shooting star
that's just me falling from the sky
I can't grant your wish
unless you want me to die
but that's never mattered
so don't cry
as my final moments
streak across the horizon.


I'd wish for you
crying out till my face was blue
the extent of what I've been through
only a fraction of what I have yet to do
I'd move heaven and earth
and give the sun, moon and stars
giftwrap them all in the sky
a prison with my heart trapped within
with this present of my life
look up and trace my downward flight
like the trail of a meteor in your name
punctuated with a sigh...

Make a wish on a shooting star
that's just me falling from the sky
I can't grant your wish
unless you want me to die
but that's never mattered
so don't cry
as my final moments
streak across the horizon.


Nothing has ever stopped me
I'd try as long as hope has a chance to be
letting me be gifted with this tired heartbeat.
So you can take advantage
of my efforts you can ravage
leaving the inner me slashed
as you lie and do something rash
to peer into my mind
alas you'll never see the inside
without removing it with a .45
even then I'll dive
too much to do yet for my soul to fly...

Make a wish on a shooting star
that's just me falling from the sky
I can't grant your wish
unless you want me to die
but that's never mattered
so don't cry
as my final moments
streak across the horizon.
©2007-2009 =Ex1
:iconex1:

Author's Comments

Invariably people write on what they see things as. I have things and issues with remembering a lot of things. *shrugs*

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:icongoingoffthedeepend:
Wow, that was absolutely brilliant, I love the chorus, it's amazingly written. Every word is perfect, with the exception of the word star in the second non-chorus thing, you wrote start, but I can see why, because as I wrote star up above this, I accidentally hit a t at the end.

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You are the faith inside of me.
:iconjeannie64:
yea sometimes we all if we are honest hon have issues remembering certain things but thats just preservation of ourselves in a way do tyou agree hon xxj fab work as always mt dear fa friend xx:):)

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life is like a bowl of jelly it takes very little to upset the balance

lifes a bitch but only if you let it be so
:iconex1:
Thank you very much for your kind words, fave and catching my common typing error. It makes me happy that someone was paying attention. *smiles*

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Tis a lifetime to find something worth searching for
:iconex1:
There are a lot of things I could say. But I'll just say thank you for your kind words and fave. Memories...meh.

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Tis a lifetime to find something worth searching for
:iconendallia:
:C

I like this one...though it reminds me of a sad time...

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"As I was killing time waiting for the killer to come and kill me"
:iconex1:
Thank you. It kind of was a sad time. *shrugs* I'm glad you liked it enough to fave it.

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Tis a lifetime to find something worth searching for
:iconendallia:
C:
you are very welcome for the fave.

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"As I was killing time waiting for the killer to come and kill me"
:iconwiccan-cat:
So sad, yet so true

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The only thing you have to do in life is die. All the rest is subjective.

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