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Takes your breath away
A source of inspiration
Imprints on your mind

Beget jealousy
Can tint the truest vision
Twist the spirit

Each glance different
Interpretations galore
All color the soul

A thousand miles
Across the world in our search
For a glimpse of it

It's part of life
What pushes us on each day
We crave it always

Every hope unique
All struggles identical
To fulfill that dream

The perfect picture
Flawless music performance
The time you live for

Utter ectasy
Your victory evident
The search is over

Desire nothing more
You have found all you wanted
Crystalline moment
©2007-2009 =Ex1
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Through all the pain, suffering, and sacrifice that life often is to experience the perfect instant of triumph at the very end of all things done well. It is what I find life to be. The quest for this occurence that we all need so much...
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at least you have a positive enough outlook on life to hope for such things. better than my hopes at least

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This is a splendid piece. I really like it!! :)

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The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return.
mY HAT IS OFF TO YOUSIR!
eXCELLENT WORK!

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More Deviant, more Angelic, more Aggresive than ever...
Brilliant piece of writing here. Nice use of the haiku method!

It is my ambition to write a story in haiku form. Some day.

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"They ate every letter in the alphabet and still had an appetite."
great piece~!

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New Account as of 6th July 2009:

[~Amberoath]
Sir. You have no idea how I felt when I posted this thing. It was written about 2 years ago at a special time. When I posted it a few days ago...you may have been surprised at how our demeanors may have been similar for the sheer lack of hope that I did have at that time.

*sighs* But hope is a choice, not random.

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Death before dishonor.

Ex
Thank you. I really like it myself. I've been saving it for quite some time. I believe it is one of my best works. *smiles gently*

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Death before dishonor.

Ex
*smiles* All I can do is bow to that. Thank you.

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Death before dishonor.

Ex
Well when you do, let me know. I love haiku a great deal. And thank you for your compliment and the fave. *smiles*

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Death before dishonor.

Ex

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